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Review:Cleopatraa says:
First thing first I have to congratulate you on that awesome summary off you it was the only reason I read it I didn’t even look at about who it is. I think you perfectly nailed down Narcissa’s character in this little piece of yours and the way they were so isolated that not even Pansy wanted to do anything with them. I mean yeah I can understand that they betrayed the Dark lord so their allies probably hate them at the moment. I loved the fact Andromeda wanted to help bury Bellatrix it showed that Blood is always thicker then water and even after all that is done to her and her family she still loves her family.

My favorite part was definitely this: “Bella’s beauty remained even after death. She had degraded a bit over the years as her zeal for the Dark Lord intensified, but she still looked like an abused doll with her bloodless skin and smudged makeup. Her black dress hugged her lifeless body, highlighting her hauntingly beautiful features even as her organs began to decay inside of her. Her untamed black hair fell around her face like the mane of a wild, enraged lion. Bella would never have settled for being a mere lioness. She fought like a man, right to the bitter end. Her wand lay within her reach.”

I mean yeah it’s a whole paragraph I copied but I think this was one of the most powerful pieces I read in your story and one of the most powerful pieces I read in awhile
- Cleopatra ( Slytherin

Author's Response: Thanks for your very sweet review! I get a lot of compliments on that paragraph, and I love Bella, so it was a ton of fun to write her, even just as a brief mention in a story. Andromeda was very sweet, wasn't she? And you've got to feel at least a little sympathy for Narcissa after all she and her family went through, so I'm glad I conveyed that in this piece.

Thanks again for reading & reviewing! :)

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