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Review:NaidatheRavenclaw says:
Hello! I really enjoyed this one shot!
You definitely have a way with words. I was salivating for bacon by the end of it. Your imagery and descriptions sprinkled throughout the piece was gorgeous. They really added a lot to the story.
One thing though, there were a couple spelling errors. For example, "For a moment I was confused, why beacon". Beacon should be bacon. There were a couple more like that as well, but its nothing a quick read through won't fix!
Other than that, it was a great one shot! I loved the emotions in this, and I loved the portrayal of their relationship. The idea at the end that it wasn't even a happy memory was heart breaking, and just the perfect end.
NaidatheRavenclaw, Ravenclaw

Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review! :D I was beginning to think no one liked this story. I am also really happy that you found my descriptions so provoking. Bacon defiantly a challenge to write into a story in a serious manner so I was happy when this story just developed on its own.
As for the mistakes I caught them after I posted this story and they have been corrected. The new version is waiting validation. However thank you for pointing them out. :)
Thank you again for your review!!! :D

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