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Review:Blue Flame says:
Narcissa became one of my favorite characters after the seventh movie, so it was lovely to see a bit about her. ^^ I think this was a short but awesome piece, with a lot of lovely lines!

Bellas beauty remained even after death. She had degraded a bit over the years as her zeal for the Dark Lord intensified, but she still looked like an abused doll with her bloodless skin and smudged makeup. - this in particular I LOVED! It kind of made me think that it's so easy to forget even the bad guys have loved ones who will mourn them.

I also liked how you had Andromeda offering to help, and Narcissa not knowing how to react to the warmth after so long.

All in all, loved this! My only complaint is it's short and I would have loved to read more! =P

-Caiti [Cappie/Hufflepuff]

Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I get a lot of compliments about the paragraph I devoted to Bella, and I appreciate yours as well. It's probably one of my favorite parts of the piece, and Narcissa's interaction with Andromeda was really nice to write as well. Glad you enjoyed it!

academica :)


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