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Review:Jolly says:
Looking forward to reading this story! I've been wanting to read something about the DA during DH for some time now. I think your characterizations are quite good, though one thing I found odd was that Molly immediately understood that it was Harry Ginny was most worried about. How much did she really know about their relationship and wouldn't she try to comfort her by telling Ginny that the whole trio would be alright?

Also found it slighly odd that Ginny doesn't worry anything about Hermione or Ron either. Sure, Harry is in a lot of danger, but the others are putting themselves in the same situation by going away with him. Also found it slightly weird (or unusual?) with so put-together (that isn't really the right word... neither is nice.. hm..) Death Eaters, but I think you did a good job in explaining why they weren't violent.

Other than that I think the story has a lot of potential for being really good. Off to read the next chapter! :)

Author's Response: Thank you very much! I brushed past a bit of characterisation with Molly as she won't be in the story much. Ginny and Neville will become 'replacements' of Hermione and Ron as Harry's 'sidekicks' in the war during this book, although Harry will be absent, if that makes sense. I wanted to form subtle connections between them, hope it came out alright.
Thanks for reviewing!

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