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Review:Toujours Padfoot says:
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Melissa!

Am I reading this correctly, and Teddy and James are vigilantes??? If so, WOW, AWESOME. If I'm wrong...well...I usually am wrong. I misread everything. Either way, this is an excellent start and I can't wait to read more.

I like the quick pace of it. It just flows seamlessly from beginning to end. And entering the scene with a murder! Very intriguing!

I love how James kisses Kara to shut her up, because I do EXACTLY the same thing to my husband when I'm wrong about something I say and he proves me wrong (which happens often, because as I said, I am very frequently wrong).

The bit with Victoire and Teddy made me sad. :( He seems so reluctant to be with her. Does he love Roxanne? Is he only with her because of John? So many questions! Gah!

Expect me to be back with more reviews. :)

Author's Response: James is not a vigilante, that I can tell you. He and Teddy are aurors though! The pace was something I tried for, since at the time I wrote this, everything I did was long and wordy and slow paced. The pace in the sequel is a little different, but it's a little bit of a longer story than this one.

Kara and James were my saving grace during this. They are the only solid relationship in the fic...

And Teddy does not love Victoire, that's for sure. Whether he loves Roxanne is up to you to decide. He's a complicated character.

Thanks for the review!! I'm anxious to see what you think as you read more, whether it be here or elsewhere.


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