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Review:charlottetrips says:
Teddy’s emotions following the MURDER of his wife come off as false. But maybe. . . you meant it to be that way? Because he’s The Murderer?!?! Ha! Got you there, did I? Or maybe not. . .

Oh goodness. How horrible it must be for Harry to suspect his own SON in this investigation. But so thorough. Gotta respect the man.

The term for someone who runs an apothecary is, believe it or not, an apothecary not an “apothecist”.

The scene between Teddy and Roxy seems disjointed and cold. Again, maybe it’s because one of them is the murderer (sorry can’t help but keep slipping that in) but if not, this part is a bit devoid of the emotion and stress one would think would be associated with the fact that family was just murdered, family that you were cheating on. Amp up the guilt!

And Teddy takes a walk leaving his son alone in an apartment? And immediately schmoozing up to Roxanne, picking up where they left off? Ugh. I am not liking him. Please tell me he is the murderer.

Author's Response: Thanks again for another wonderful review!! the intent of this fic was to highlight the crumbling familal relationships. Seeing as you've finished the fic, I suppose I can say that the lack of emotion in that scene is suitable considering the murder's identity.

I had no idea that an apothecary worked at an apothecary. :P

thanks!

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