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Review:charlottetrips says:
Char from the Forums here with your review. Iíll divide it up over the chapters. Itís also a running review as I am reading and writing my review at the same time so itíll sound like I donít know what happens at the end of the chapter when Iím writing it (because I donít!) :)

First of all, this is probably my first murder-mystery fanfic that Iíve read! I immediately appreciated your ability to describe the scene in the first section there re the murder. Itís a complete mystery yet thrilling all at once!

The intros to James and Teddy were interesting. Blood on Jamesí clothes, hm? Also one can see that Jamesí relationship is vastly different than that of Teddyís. I feel apprehensive about the possible heartbreak in Teddyís marriageÖ

One thing: ďShe moved behind him and laced her arms around his [waste].Ē Ė should be [waist]

Author's Response: Hey Char!!

I'll be posting a response to all of your wonderful reviews, but a general statement to all of them: Thank you! They were all a lovely combination of critique and compliments -- a very effective review style in my opinion.

Now onto this specific review: I'm so glad that my story was your first murder mystery. (Can't judge too too harshly :P ) Thanks for the typo spot! I wrote this all very fast and didn't have a beta for fear of my ending being revealed.

Thanks so much!
Melissa


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