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Review:charlottetrips says:
There was something altogether beautiful with the way this was written. I’m not quite sure what is is but sentences like this, “I watch him, trying to figure just what about him is a different material; but he slides in and out of my conscious understanding too quickly for me to grasp” are what I am talking about.

I was confused by one line: “He sets my [composition] alight when he is happy”. I don’t quite follow—“work of art”, “the way things are arranged”, “a piece of music”?

The part where Louis is describing the things he remembers about Annie was SWOON-worthy!

I’m so glad that I read “Best Served Cold” first because it really let me in on how Louis felt about Annie as well (since this story is told from Annie’s perspective and I could’ve felt a bit sorry for her seemingly unrequited love). The way that she adored him and the way he obviously adored her was so sweet, innocent yet passionate.

It was lovely, simply lovely. XD

xChar (#3 review by the by!)

Author's Response: baww thank you! this review made me smile :)
that line about the composition is the second definition you've offered: i meant it as her makeup, the things that compose her body and spirit...ish deal :P
i'm glad that he prequel actually serves as a functioning prequel and lets you know a little more about louis :) with this story i meant for annie's love to be a little ambiguous, because louis is so unintentionally manipulative, but i guess that isn't the most noteworthy aspect hehe :D
thanks so, so much for the reviews, you've really made my day !!

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