Report a Review

This service is designed to allow HPFF users to alert the staff about inappropriate reviews.

Review:Toujours Padfoot says:
I am in love with this story.

Your Lily Potter embodies every single perfection that every cliche-loving author on HPFF stuffs her with.

Because like, even though it happened every day, she was totally justified in always being upset and surprised about it cause she had other things on her mind. - SO TRUE. I don't know about you, but if some hot guy was hitting on me all the time, I would just thank him for the ego boost and be on my way. But in fanfiction, this is never possible. No, Lily must be a man-eater who screams her head off whenever she sees James's face.

Head girl. Nice to everyone. 21:20 vision. Good at focusing. An endurance runner. RUNNING FOR CHARITY. Oh my God! I LOVE IT. Photographic memory. Matching Sirius and Remus together. Classically trained in the Italian Opera. THERE IS NOTHING LILY CANNOT DO. She is a mighty beast with great hair and is super smart and super pretty with huge green eyes.

Toerag with a rose between his teeth. IT'S JUST TOO MUCH. I love it. I love all of the toe-raggedyness.

FIESTA! A FIESTA MAKES EVERYTHING BETTER! Especially when it's snowing and the snow gets caught in your mouth and you choke on it.

AND HE IS MY TRUE HOMEBOY, THE COOLEST OF THE COOL, THE MOST HIGH, LOVELIEST HOTTEST MAN I HAVE EVER KNOWN WHO HAS FEELINGS!

BEST LINE EVER.

Take your mask. And take my heart.

From beginning to end, this one-shot is like an explosion of vomit-inducing brilliance. I LOVE how you have exposed the Lily-James cliche and made it so darn funny. Thank you for taking part in this challenge, it was a thrill to read. :)

Author's Response: wowww LURVE!!?!? i'm so impressed that your eyes withstood the acidic demolition that this story was meant to unleash :P

bahaha you know reading this review has reminded me how spur of the moment all of those details were...seriously as soon as i remembered some other well-worn aspect of lily's character i'd just chuck it in there and rattle it around a little, so when i saw some of the things you mentioned here at first i was like "wut...?" but then i went back and read it and just...just yes. it's there :P
thank YOU so much for coming up with the challenge...i didn't know if i would be able to write it without wanting to end my life but i'm still living...so i'm not sure what to say about that AHEM

thanks for the review, and i'm sooo glad that you appreciated this story for the horribleness monster it is inside. no one likes to be judged :D

Your Name:
Reason for this Report:

Examples:
  • The review is offensive.
  • The review is spam or chit-chat (not actually a review).
  • The review was double posted.
  • The review has formatting problems.
Submit Report:  





All stories remain the property of their authors and must not be copied in any form without their consent. This is an unofficial, not for profit site, and is in no way connected with J.K. Rowling, Scholastic Books or Bloomsbury Publishing or Warner Bros. It is not endorsed by any of the aforementioned parties. Rights to characters and their images is neither claimed nor implied. The use of photographs and/or the likeness of any person contained herein does not imply endorsement of any kind. Any depictions were obtained through publically available sources and therefore fall under fair use. Although we may provide links to other websites, we are not responsible for any material at these sites. You acknowledge that you link to these other websites at your own risk. All original administrative content is copyright of the site owner and must not be copied in any form (electronic or otherwise) without the prior consent of the siteowner. ©2000-2012 Fanfictionworld.net

[terms of service] [report abuse] [privacy policy] [site credits]
 
 

navigation

home

search HPFF
read stories
write stories
login/register
get help
site links
forums
podcasts
Terms of Service
Site Rules
contact us

  
 
 

categories & genres

Genre:
- crossover
- drama
- fluff
- general
- horror/dark
- humor
- mystery
- romance
- action/adventure
- angst
- au
- young adult

Popular Pairings:
- harry/ginny
- ron/hermione
- james/lily
- draco/hermione
- more...

Format:
- one-shot
- short story
- novella
- novel
- short story collection
- songfic

  
 
 

quick links

my account
ToS
random story
site rules
help
merchandise


  
 
 

fanfictionworld.net