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Review:krissyanne426 says:
Hello again!

This was another great chapter! I kind of like the idea that his sister is so bitter, because its so plausible. And it's kind of a parallel to petunia/lily.

Your writing is amazing! It's so enjoyable to read and it flows really well. And it's all important things. There doesn't seem to be anything really unnessecary. I feel like everything your telling me will be important at some point, so that's really great!

I like Ezekiel, but I have to admit - I really want to know what happened to his brother! And also, I may have just missed this, but was there a description of his looks? Just curious because in my mind I kind if picture him being totally adorable.

Great job! Feel free to request again!
Kristen=]

Author's Response: You've got it, there is a bit of Petunia/Lily tension between the two of them. Goes a little deeper and different, though. ;)

Thank you so much! You've got it, everything is like a little nugget. So go get your rock collection box and stick 'em in there - you'll need them later!

Thomas died when they were young because of his mother's hereditary disease that was only given to her first born. Ezekiel WAS a sickly child but he never got as far as his mother or brother. There's a brief description of himself as he looks in the mirror (being first person, descriptions of the main character are difficult, so generally I like to use a mirrored reflection sort of deal). He's very gangly, awkwardly tall, willowy and thin - coarse brown hair, and some freckles. -nods- He really is adorable. ;)

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