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Review:LoopyLemon says:
This is really good.

I love how you have given Goyle a voice of his own when he is usually defined by someone else. There is a maturity in him that the books do not convey. He seemed like another sidekick in the book, just like his son, where here he seems completly aware of the path life took him on.

I really enjoyed the fact that he showed apathy and indifferance to his life. Most fics like this show the bad characters as either hating their life but doing it because it was expected or else they completly believe in the way they live. Goyle seemed to know that what he was doing might not be that great but it was what was expected, and he didn't mind doing it.

I loved the ending as well. How all he could think of in his final free moments was the welfare of his son, how Harry had given him a better chance at life.

Good Job! 10/10

Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review! I'm so glad you liked it. I really didn't want to portray hi mas just another sidekick - I didn't think that was fair to him. I'm glad it seems as though he had some depth. :P Thanks for much for the kind words! :)

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