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Review:Aiedail says:
Haha this made me giggle so much!

I like the banter most. I like the casual friendship of Byron and Louis, and that they're always making fun of each other. I also really love the way that you allude to several past events like "cairo" and the ghost :) It's really realistic, and also the bit about "veela-boy" was silly.

I thought it was also funny when Byron said that he didn't think Louis was that nice. Since I have yet to see him in action when he isn't in the state he's in, I can't say if I agree or disagree.

I think you do a really good job with the characters here! It's hard to write next-gen canon characters because all we really have to go off of is their parents, and that just splits the cliche in two and makes originality hard to attain. I think you're on the right track with Louis; he seems like he has good potential, and I really believe him as a character!! I like Byron, too, he's a good friend :) Plus, I like the way he gives Louis a hard time. They seem friendly, but not flawless (a little obvious, haha). I can't wait to see how Louis decides to be "bad"--I can imagine it as a horribly awkward and clumsy affair, with his hair slicked back and leaning on one arm at bars, trying to catch the girls' attention :)

I hope that you continue with this one! The banner is also really lovely and fits with the story well I think :)

I'm so glad that I decided to do the review exchange with you! I think I'll go ahead and look at some of your others as well :)

--lily

Author's Response: Byron and Louis are such silly gooses. Really. They're THAT pair of friends. Both completely deadly handsome, but ridiculous, you know? And it's funny you should mention Byron not thinking Louis is nice, because what if he isn't? What if the ends of his relationships had nothing to do with that? It's an interesting thing to think about.

LOLOL. You have it exactly right about Louis trying to be bad. Luckily, he has a few people to help him out and keep him away from hair gel and leather jackets, haha.

Thanks so much for the review dear!

Annie

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