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Review:SnitchSnatcher says:
This is beautiful, Rachel, just like all of your work. But there was something about this piece that really spoke to me. I can't put my finger on it, perhaps it was the solemnity or the sudden, almost breathtaking shift in mood, but it really stopped me and made me think about what I'd just read, which, admittedly, doesn't happen very often.

My heart broke for poor James when I realized what was happening. You've always been so incredibly gifted at portraying a character's emotions and getting inside of their heads, and this one-shot was no different. Even though our time with James and Albus was brief, it spoke volumes about their personalities and just...good lord, it was just amazing.

I really really loved this, Rachel. You did a beyond fabulous job.

Molly ♥

Author's Response: ♥

I think it was the complete abandonment of that dreamier style I'd adopted for myself, perhaps. This, when I read it back, made me want to take lots of bows and ribbons and extravagant pretty things and wrap it up in them. Maybe it doesn't need it. It's definitely a little more straight-forward in the way it's been written, though, along with a slightly complex plot that does probably need a bit of deciphering.

I was writing this and doing the 'I don't know where this is going but we'll see' thing, so when I realised what James was there for, I was a little bit 'oh, no' about it. I was telling Marina after I wrote it that this had started as a Teddy/Victoire, singing 'Five Little Speckled Frogs' before me murdering her, so the way it actually played out was far more touching than I'd originally anticipated.

Thank you so, so much, lovely. I'm terribly glad that you liked it - it really does mean the world to me ^_^

♥
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