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Review:flying_rabbit says:
Sorry it took me so long to get here! Homework was not very nice to me.
Wow, she sat there for hours? I guess that's understandable, given the state he's in and how she feels about him. It's just so sad :( I liked the fact that Louis was listening in to Stephanie and her mum talking - at least he could tell her as well not to worry too much. If only she would listen.
Oh, that's nice of Hannah, giving Stephanie a couple of days off :) Stephanie's really lucky to have a boss like that. The woman behind the reception desk was afraid of her? Haha, great :D
Oh, Madeline. Where did she come from all of a sudden? Why did she have to be there? On the other hand, at least Stephanie now knows about her, right? Though it must not have been a nice scene to witness. Poor Stephanie :(
I don't quite remember, but I'm sure it was in an earlier chapter, so I'm sorry - but for how long had Louis been back in England already when he and Stephanie met? And did he and Madeline break up because he was going back to England or because of something else? If it's the first option, that's not very good.
Louis kept quite some secrets from Stephanie indeed, so I can imagine that this is really her breaking point. Some time, she was bound to get sick of all of his secrets. Though, of course, it's still quite a pity - they're so sweet together. Hopefully they will make up in the end. I really feel bad for Stephanie. Why is it always her indeed. I hope that someone will find her there - maybe Louis was in such a state that he sent Bill after Stephanie? I don't think it would be a wise choice of Louis' to go after her himself. Or maybe someone else entirely finds her - another member of the Weasley clan, perhaps? Hopefully she'll get through this...
Good luck with everything - it sounds like you're quite busy! Still, I can't wait to see what happens next! :)

Author's Response: Hey! sorry it took me sooo long to respond! I wanted to read your review and respond thoughtfully! :)
I love hannah. she's such a motherly figure and so wonderful to write! The lady behind the desk was hilarious to do. I wanted something to lighten the mood a tad!
Ahhh yes Madeline. She came out of my head. I don't know if i ever even said how long Louis had been back when he first met Steph. Let's say he was only back a couple weeks. They broke up before he left for home, yes. It'll be explained in the next chapter! I don't want to give away too much. ;)

I knew at some point, Steph would need to get sick of the secrets. Because as humans, we don't like secrets either. So I thought it was realistic and I'm glad it fits.

I didn't want Louis to go after Stephanie for various reasons. One, because that's the predicted choice (I like to be surprising). Two, because Louis is in the hospital, after having another surgery. He wouldn't be able to successfully chase her down. three, i couldn't envision him catching her. I thought about having him chase her but then what? I couldn't figure out what would happen next. So I sent Bill after her.

As for who finds her, we'll find out won't we? the next chapter has a lot of explaining. ;)

I am quite busy being a full time student! Homework piles up fast but I have time to write! don't worry! Thanks so much for reading and reviewing! You are awesome!


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