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Review:Reyes91 says:
Interesting, a historical story. Never read a fully historical fanfiction before, I don't believe. I'm interested so far.

The characters speak very realistically for that time period. Well...realistic enough considering I barely paid any attention in my own history classes to know exactly how people spoke back then. Also, I have to touch on your description. It's wonderfully written, my friend. You definitely made me feel for this character in such a short prologue. I think I may have to read on so I can see how you're going to mix this up with HP magic. Seems hard. Well, for me it does since, once again, I suck at history and things like this.

And the spell that Ay dude performed gave me a bit of a chill. It just lets you know that something bad is going to happen to someone who will go in there. Something really bad.

Nothing for me to critique, dude. This was a very good start and definitely drew me in.

-Reyes91

P.S. Oh, and I like that name you picked for your character(Ankesenamun). It's so...cool sounding. Can't even pronounce it, but I like it. :)

Author's Response: Thank you very much for reading and reviewing! It was a challenge to make the Potterverse work in such a historical period, but I've got a strong interest in Egyptian history, ancient and more modern, which made at least the research aspects fun. :D I'm glad that you like Ankesenamun - she's actually a real historical character, the wife of Tutankhamun, and it was great to finally give her a voice, as she often gets forgotten in history, married off to another man after the death of her husband.

It's great to hear that you've enjoyed this chapter! :)


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