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Review:siriuslyawesome says:
No there is still more james and lily in closetness to be had yet there are no more chapters to read! Im back and reviewing again so you must post, my return must e what you've been waiting for afer all because a long wait would just be cruel

Interesting lilly doesn't like people touching her ears thats a strange little quirk that has me thinking why would someone touch her ear

*James ostentatiously waved his wand and shouted with a ridiculously pompous accent, “open sesame!*
-Oh jamsie is a little testy though i did enjoy it i liked the common muggle magic thrown in by a wizard

*And don’t you even play coy like the unicorn who fancied his own horn.*
- i loved this whole part firstly cause it was hysterical and secondly because other writers try to slip in magical things but do it awkwardly the way you wrote this made it like something every wizard would understand and say when joking around not oh right there wizards so i have to throw magical stuff into there normal conversations

*the only regret I have is that you’re not here because I know that you’d be right beside me guarding the blasted door. But in every way, you already are…*
- CAN THEY FALL AND LOVE AND BE TOGETHER FOREVER YET GESSH

*she’d fainted from her own dreaded phobia of closed spaces in front of the one person who scared her most*
- it's interesting that he is the one she is scared of is it because she just can't control her self around him. He was so good though taking care of her even when he is not chasing after her he can't help but be good to her *sigh* love

Every time lilly says something diry i laugh so hard you write so well i can just see it all playing out in my head like im watching a fantastic movie

*The concentric circles he absentmindedly traced on the back of her hand didn’t help matters. Shannon could feel the ripples radiate outwards from inside her stomach to her toes.*
-Its so hard to be like no she is wirh sirius because remus and her seem so good to each other and we know sirius likes julia but you still don't want him to be hurt but these two are clearly meant to be together somehow, i can't wait to see how you work everything out because even with boys dating ur mates ex isn't always looked highly upon. Maybe sirius will be the bigger man?

*“Lily and James have hexed his sorry arse back to the Dark Ages. And knowing Sirius, he’d most likely be turning every witch-hunt topsy-turvy.”*
This was just witty i love the dialogue you write... if you were to ever pen a movie i would go to the midnight showing

angelina deserves to be hexed i hope she falls down a flight of magically moving stairs

i hope that you post again soon and i promise if you do it wont take me over a year to review, i really love this story and if it weren't for all the copywrite issues you could publish it it is truly that fantastic.

Author's Response: So I did FINALLY post a new chapter, it's waiting in the queue as we speak. All of your comments are so wonderful, and it makes me so happy. I'd love to write a movie one day, but the hard part is coming up with an original idea. It's easy to play in someone else's back yard, JK really has one heck of one. But, I promise to keep working on this story, yet, I fear that you will be unhappy to know that Sirius and Julia will not meet for some time. Remember, she's just 14 at this point. The next few chapters will start to tie up some things so we can get to what everyone's been waiting for. Thanks again for your fantastic reviews :)

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