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Review:ochalke5 says:
Okay first off i just have to say, that i'm sorry i have't reviewed along the way, but i just wanted to keep reading.

Secondly, this story is amazing, it's so different and wonderful. I love this story. I like how close Steph and Louis are, i think it shows that when two people really connect you can tell right away.

I like that things with her mother are getting better. I had hoped that things would have stayed good for her for just a little bit at least, but I am extremely excited to see where you take these next few chapters. It's such a wonderful story, really it's amazing.

Now, you're writing. I"m sure that you've been told this by other reviewers and each time i read a chatper i marval at how wonderful each chapter is. They just keep getting better and better. It's wonderful to watch you grow with your writing. And the way you put emotion into your story is brilliant. You can really connect to the story and the people in it better.

Plain and simple your writing is brilliant, and although you already know this it's still nice to hear. I love this story, and I love your writing, you must update as soon as you get a chance. It's a wonderful story and i'm thrilled to have found it.

I have a few ideas on how you could possible end the story and I hope that Louis gets better, but I'm sure you know how it's going to end. But I always have to wonder if you keep him heathly enough to go home but then have him die off in the end? Killing Louis off in the end, could have mixed reactions, but I think that no matter what ending you pick that it will be brilliant.

Natalie
Wow, just wow.
10/10

Author's Response: hey Natalie!

that's fine, I am glad you're reading the story! Reviews are nice and appreciated but totally not necessary at all.
oh wow thanks so much! *blush* I'm really glad you like this fic!

I am glad you like how her mother is getting better. I wanted Steph to have somethings go well for her.

oh wow thanks! *blush* i'm very flattered that you think my writing has grown over the past few chapters. I like to think my writing has improved over the years as I grow and experience more. It's nice to hear you like my writing and you think that it's easy to connect to. I try to put in things that connect with my personally as well as other people.

you are so sweet! i don't even know what to say! *blush* It definitely is nice to hear my writing is good. course even if I didn't hear that, I would still write. I love writing too much to give up on it.

I'm glad you have ideas for the end! I like it when readers start to think of what could happen. Course, you won't know until I update again but don't worry, I'll update asap! I'm very busy the next two weeks as school is starting up soon but once school starts, I'll update more. I may get in another chapter the next few days.. we'll see.

I honestly don't know if I could kill off Louis in the end. For several reasons, I'd have a lot of angry people as everyone seemingly loves him. I'd also have a very sad ending. I rather like the happy endings in fics like these. I would also have an issue as to how I'd end it. Steph would be alone and I'm not sure I'd want that for her as a character... I don't know. I have debated on killing Louis off but I don't think I'd have the heart to do it. I love him too much as a writer. :)

I'm glad you reviewed!!! It's so nice to hear people's reactions to certain things and get honest reactions! Thanks so much! I hope you keep reading!! I'll look forward to any other thoughts you have on future chapters!!!


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