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Review:flying_rabbit says:
Oh, I'm glad Fleur taught Stephanie some French now! She still has a long way to go until she understands everything he says, but it's a nice start.
I liked Louis' stubbornness - Weasleys seem stubborn indeed, and I don't think there's anyone in the world who's always more than happy to follow the doctors' orders. They're never just nice and easy to follow.
Stephanie's mother's amazement at being at the Potters' was quite funny! I can imagine that a lot of people would wonder how it'd be, meeting them, and she just did that! It's almost like a tv show, meet your favourite celebrity! But it's great, of course, that her mother could stay with them :)
Hannah's awesome :D I can see why Neville married her! I mean, not everyone would be happy to have their employees' family staying over too, or offer that same family a job. I like your take on the space problem; of course, they're magical, they can just make rooms as big as they want them to be! Hannah certainly did a nice job there. The talk to her mother was emotional indeed. I'm glad her mother is back and with her again :)
It's really awful that Louis' situation went downwards again when Stephanie wasn't there. Her mother is right, she was much too distraught to be able to travel by herself. And I liked how she yelled at the receptionist :D Luckily, Dom came by.
Is Louis still in such a bad situation, now that he has woken up? Stephanie couldn't have a better timing, speaking French to Louis! His reaction was great, very sweet :) I hope he will be alright in the end...
Hopefully you'll update soon! :)

Author's Response: i was hoping someone would like that bit! I wanted to put it in there so badly but i needed the right moment! I actually put it in at last minute!!! I really wanted her to speak at least a bit of French. :)
The Weasleys are stubborn in my mind. i'm glad you like that!
haha it is almost like that! I never thought of that. I'd have the same reactions as her mother though. I'd freak if I met my favorite actors or actresses.
Hannah is amazing for sure! She's sort of the mother that Stephanie never had growing up. Hannah was there for her as a motherly figure. I debated on having them move out to a different place but then i'm like, "Can't they just make the room bigger with magic?" So i did that instead. glad you like my take on it!

there had to be some conflict otherwise the story would've ended right there. i want to keep people happy as everyone is seeming to like this fic so i want at least two more chapters.
the yelling at the receptionist is what i would've done. i thought it was rather funny and it lightened the mood a bit.
As far as how Louis is doing, you'll find out in the next upcoming chapter!!!
It won't be long, i promise.
I'll update soon! Thanks for the sweet review! You made my day! :)

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