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Review:almonster says:
I like this a lot. When I first read the description I thought it was gonna be Dumbledore vs. Grindewald. I like the insight into seventeen-year-old Albus's mind much better. Especially since it had similarities to my favorite detective ever. :P

I like how you described Dumbledore's family thru his eyes. And that professor too. I loved this line "It was really unbearable that such a person could be allowed to teach, no matter how desperate they were for professors at this school." I'm sure some students and their parents thought the same about some of the DADA professors Dumbledore hired. This story was very well done :D

~alex

Author's Response: It's funny because I originally wanted to make the story about D vs. G, but then it didn't fit into the canon timeline, so I took a different direction.

It's great that you liked the characterization of Dumbledore, particularly the Sherlock Holmes aspect. Their portrayals seemed suiting to one another, and it made it a lot easier to have a point of inspiration, Dumbledore himself having altered so much after the death of his sister.

Thank you very much for reading and reviewing! I really appreciate hearing from you! :)


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