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Review:writergirl8 says:
That. Was. AWESOME! Seriously, you almost made my cry, and I literally said "Aaaaw!" at the end. I loooved Hermione's reaction to the 'Yule Brawl' (which, by the way, was flipping brilliant). I loved how she took the book and hid her face, and Ron didn't know that she was crying behind there until three years later. I do believe that sometimes Hermione uses books to hide from pain, and to hide herself when she's weak. Metaphorically, as well literally. This proves that I'm not the only one :) The scarf: perfect. I always thought that Hermione might have done something in sixth year if Lavender hadn't come along, maybe dropped some subtle hints, upped the anty a little bit. Once again: scarf=proof. The ending was great, I TOTALLY should have seen that coming ("I, who have gone further then anyone on the path to knowing everything there is on Ron and Hermione's love for each other!" Hehe I stole a line from Voldy :P DISCLAIMER!) but I really did not. How perfect! *Virtual HUG!* I really, really, really, really, really, really, really (Do you want more? Because I can do more...) really, really, really, really hope you write more Romione. It doesn't even have to be a sequel, just more Romione. And may I also say how much your writing has improved since you started Time Traveler? A LOT! ~writergirl8

Author's Response: EEEP! Thank you so much! You have no idea how much this review means to me. I literally have this huge goofy grin on my face and my friend (who isn't aware of my HP obession is beginning to ask questions). Now, to get to your review:

I always figured Hermione would be more angry than upset after the Yule Brawl, and when she hits her head against the headboard--that's what triggers her tears, more than Ron. She's so defeated and tired and... defeated.

Books. Hermione and books. Yeah. I'm just going to agree with you on the whole Hermione-uses-books-to-hide-her-hurt theroy, because I wholy agree with that.

The Scarf: so there were 2 reasons behind that. The first was, as you said, I always figured that Hermione would make something for Ron. I mean, why wouldn't she? The second is, (Oh Merlin, get ready for a long explanation) that Ron bases his relationships off his parents'. When he grows up, he sees his mum and dad bicker playfully and exchange witty banter. Naturally, he's going to be attracted to the first girl he bickers with. He sees his father love/have a hobby of something his wife doesn't quite approve of. For Arthur, it's Muggle stuff (in which Molly doesn't approve). For Ron, it's Quidditch (in which Hermione doesn't quite approve). SEE?? Ok, to finish this point and relate it to your comment, growing up, Ron sees his mother knit things her her loved ones... and who knits? Hermione. So, hopefully I didn't confuse you and enlightened you on your path to understanding (I'm always testing out therories and re-reading the earlier books to figure out what are clues and foreshaddowing and such) Ron and Hermione's relationship.

*Virtual HUGS BACK!* I absolutely love writing Ronmione, so I don't plan to stop. Right now, I'm experimenting with everything from Second Gen. to Percy/Audrey (my 2nd fav. paring) and even attempted a Neville/Hannah (and failed miserably). I have about 12 half-finished Ronmiones on my computer (I'm so bad) so... yeah.

Thank you. I can really see how I've improved too. At certain points, I cringe when I read Time Traveler, but I'm slowly chugging through it. I can see a change in my writing with each chapter I put up, you know?

but, anyway, to wrap up this ridiculiously long Author's response, I'm going to say thank you as many times as you said really, so, thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you SO much for your review, it easily made my week. :) *smiles goofily*

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