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Review:butterbeergal says:
Oh my god, this was heartbreakingly beautiful. I simply cannot stop crying, and I had to read it again because the tears just kept on coming and obscuring my view of the screen. The part when Hermione was thinking that he wasn't supposed to go first makes me bawl every time.

Wow.

Okay, obviously I loved this. Not only was it very well written, it was also so honest and heartfelt. As much as I enjoy reading flowery descriptions and such, the simplicity with which you treated this piece was perfect. Hermione's voice was spot on, and you effectively took me into her mind whilst she was conversing with Harry, making me feel the full depth of her emotions. And boy was it intense. Every word was where it should be, and every pause was perfectly timed making for the most emotional one-shot that I have ever read. Ever.

But, the next time we'll meet, it'll be in another train compartment. You're already waiting, I know. I can almost see you - you're sitting in solitude - and I've yet to step inside. You're eleven - twelve? - and it'll just be a little longer. I'm almost there.

Somehow, you've managed to capture what I always thought death would be like. I don't know how, I don't know why, but this was exactly what I pictured it to be - a throwback to the best moments of one's life.

I'm still trying to piece back the broken mess that is my heart. And even though this has caused me much sadness, it is going straight to my favorites.

Wonderful doesn't even begin to describe what this was for me.

Cheers,
Gillian

Author's Response: Hi Gillian! 'Tis Celeste of the c-box here! :)

Wow, I made you cry?! That is a gigantic compliment! I really wasn't expecting anyone to cry, but I'm really, really pleased you liked it.

To be honest, I don't really know how to respond to this absolutely magnificent review, so I'll just continue blabbering my thanks. I'll completely humbled and grateful that you liked this little one-shot so much. So, thank you so much for reviewing this. It means the world. ^___^

- Celeste

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