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Review:LindaSnape says:
I read this some time ago, but I hadn't reviewed it yet, I'm sorry about that. I feel bad for waiting so long to review on something that I really enjoyed.

The writing in this was beautiful. It was really emotional and moving. Not to mention it was almost quite poetic in some parts and I really liked how you managed to pull that off whilst still pushing a plot driven story. That was quite genius of you!

The characterizations in this were gripping and moving, and seemed quite realistic. I know what it's like to be pulled down to a place because of one person and then have them ripped away from you. It does give the sense of urgency to flee.

As far as I can recall there were no spelling or grammatical errors that I picked up on, so kudos there. It's always nice to be pulled into a story and not be jarred with those distractions.

Lovely work!

If you couldn't tell from my gushing already, I absolutely adored this. It was sad and tragic, but it was also very real. Not everything in life is rainbows and unicorns as much as we wish that it could be.


Linders

Author's Response: I always appreciate reviews, whenever they come! I didn't know you were reading the Unsinkable-verse, that's cool :) I hope you liked it.

Orthography is one of my strong points, if I may brag a moment :) I don't use a beta, so I just re-read a few times and hope to catch all the typos.

I actually wrote this about two years ago. It was sort of a relief to finally post it. It's been through many revisions since then in the first half, but Siobhan's finding the bodies has remained much the same. It is pretty tragic :/

Thank you so much for the review!


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