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Review:DarcyRenay says:
*sniff* I tried not to cry.it didn't work. Wow, you know how to write a story. So, first of all, I suppose that does work, because I don't know if Sirius would let her her break up with him in the first place! It's ridiculously sad, but it's so fitting that I'll just deal with it and be depressed for the next week. Hope you're happy. -_-
Now.
CONGRATULATIONS! You finished a story!! And it was amazing!! You are going to write more stories, right? Because you need to. Some stories where the main character's don't die. Anyway, that was wonderful, amazing, and one of the best I've ever read on this site. My favorite chapter was the one where Sirius asks her to dance for the first time. It's just, really amazing. AMAZING. That is how I will forever think of you.
So, to conclude and summarize...
This story = AMAZING
You = AMAZING
Your writing = AMAZING
This Epilogue = Not so amazing, but fitting
Everything else = PHENOMENAL

Rating: Off the charts, with so many zeroes that I can't put them all here!


Author's Response: Hi Darcy! Thanks for reviewing again!

Yes, sorry about that. I knew that there would be some people who cried in this chapter, but it couldn't be avoided. Unfortunately, as you recognise, having them break up just wouldn't have worked as well for the story, not to mention the problems I would then have with canon (where WAS she when the Order re-formed?). I hope you weren't really depressed for the past week, though, that would be awful. :(

I smiled a bit at your request that I write some more stories where the main character doesn't die ... I'll see what I can do for you. First, though, I'll be loading up a series of one-shots based on the HTM universe so that's the next thing that will appear on my author page, and in the meantime I'll see if I can't find some inspiration somewhere.

And thank you so much for saying such lovely things about me and my story! That really does make my day. *beams* I'm so pleased you liked it so much, that's fantastic, especially since this is the first time I've attempted a story this long.

thanks again, Mel

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