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Review:Schnatz says:
Hey,
the last chapters were great. I really liked that the parents - especially James' and Lily's parents - appeared. They are all lovely! I also liked your Petunia, you did a great job with her. She is just as that I can imagine her. Furthermore I liked the scene where James said Lily that he loves her and where Lily answers that she likes him a lot. I liked that Lily didn't say that she loves James, because love is something which has to arise slowly. But I'm sure Lily will say 'I love you, James.' soon, won't she? ;-)
The chapter 'St Mungo's' was sad. Firstly because James' dad was attacked by death eaters. Here you also built in clever that Voldemort is getting more and more powerful. And then it was very sad reading (or rather not really reading) about Nadia. I hope she is finde.
Love, Schnatz

Author's Response: I love to work with Petunia's character as a young adult because she has such a bad attitude it makes it rather amusing. I always figured that James would be the first to say 'I love you' and not care if Lily didn't say it right away. He's just that in love with her! The St. Mungo's chapter was a reality check in a way. A reminder that the world outside Hogwarts is not as safe as inside.

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