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Review:morgana67 says:
Very powerful plot! You send the reader back in time really well and you are really skilled at combining the events of the Muggle world at the time with what we know of the attitutes of some elite pure blood families. However, the father comes across as a middle of the road character (in a good way) in that he is neither totally a sympathetic character nor a wholy unsympathetic one, which I personally find interesting.

So the wheels are in motion now for her to travel to Egypt. You still maintain quite a lot of intrigue in terms of what her life there will become.

Author's Response: Thank you very much! Wow, it's wonderful that you like how the setting, time frame, and characters have turned out so far. I actually liked writing Helen's parents, as strange as they are, and I'm sorry that their limited to this single chapter. Her father is especially interesting for being so ambiguous in nature - he doesn't show his cards to anyone. I might bring in hints of him as Helen slowly reveals more about herself, but we'll see how that goes.

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