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Review:kandekisses says:
I have such a big smile on my face right now. That was really cute.

You made it seem believable and I could really picture that happening. I don't think you should worry too much about it being short though. It was short and sweet. You definitely got your point across and honestly I couldn't picture it with more added. Although, I think this is a very nice candidate for a sequel lol.

I liked how you characterized Draco. It's like everything he was holding in just came pouring out, which is understandable because of the high stress situation. My favorite part was at the end, after they kissed. Hermione's last line there was so perfect.

The only thing that stuck out to me is when Hermione says "Good bye, Draco Malfoy". I don't know why but I don't really like the fact that she used his whole name in that situation. XD lol don't mind me..

I think you did a nice job on this one-shot. I'd love to read more from you. Its nice to come across good Dramione's =)

Author's Response: Hey there, thank you so much for your review! :D

I'm so glad you liked it! This idea was in my head forever before I actually wrote it. :] I'll go check how it sounds with just his first name there, but I can't guarantee anything. :] But if that's your only complaint? Awesome!

Thank you again! :] I really have been considering a sequel to this one...

--Emily

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