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Review:applecrumble says:
I loved Ginny trying to cook. It's hilarious! I enjoyed the drama at the end of this, particularly as so much of this chapter was really happy.

My only criticism is the talk between Anna and Roxanne. It just seemed really quick the way Roxanne forgave her. I think she'd want to make some sort of deal with Annalise about how to include her in the group. Or maybe Annalise could go away and let her spend some time with her best friends too! I used to know a couple of people like Roxanne and it was my job to sort their problems out and it took forever. I know the conversation can't drag on for ages, but I've never known someone who's been jealous and resentful for a long time put it all aside because they got an apology. Hope I'm not sounding too harsh! I did love this chapter, I just thought that part was a little unrealistic :).

Author's Response: Things between Roxanne and Anna will be awkward for awhile... it will take time for them to become friends so don't worry about that :) And remember, they're like twelve... fights between girls don't last that long. Roxanne will be slightly resentful for awhile. I'm glad you liked the chapter!

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