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Review:Margravine says:
Hello dear
I think the person change works wondefully. You've compressed quite a lot in a very small space and it's very heartbreaking.

I'll repeat my PM and say how much I ADORED the beginning and ending. One thing I didn't pick up:

Had Lorcan said anything to Lysander about Lydia?
was this meant to be humorous? because I giggled :)

Another thing is that you could sometimes replace Lysander with he more? idk, not a big deal. It's a lovely piece my dear and you did wonders with the photo (I had this first but couldn't find inspiration. Love what you did with it!)

xx

Author's Response: Hello!

Thanks dearie. :) I like the third person so much more than I liked the first person person. I had never written Lysander before, but I really like him now. Depending on how things pan out, I may do a quick short story about Lorcan, Lysander, and Maggie. :) Not many Scamander boy love triangles out there... could be fun.

thanks for reading over this and for this splendid review. :)
Melissa

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