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Review:redherring says:
Actually, I think you are quite mysterious and it wasn't that obvious who the main character was, mainly because I'm still not entirely sure (although I can be a bit dim when it comes to things like this xD). I had Percy in my head when I was reading it, but then there were moments when I wasn't sure if he fitted or not...

But whoever he was, this was completely wonderful, Mel! I loved every line of it, but I think my favourite has to be: For there is compassion in his silence, and there is faithfulness in his sigh. There is wisdom in his scruples, and in the circles under his eyes. The last line was really beautiful as well.

Amazing, as always! :)

Author's Response: Thanks for the review, Lizzie!

I think you are NOT dim, because Percy is exactly who I had in mind when I wrote this. You get cookies for figuring it out! :-D

That line is one of my favorites as well - at least one of the lines I think I'm truly happy with in this one-shot.

Glad you liked it!

xoxo
Melanie


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