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Review:hallowsorhorcruxes says:
Oi! Jill! I should not have to find out that you have a new songfic by stalking your author's page! *glares* (:

I rather enjoyed this one-shot; I'm not usually a Sirius/Lily shipper either, but I think in this writing it feels natural. Sirius' internal monologue- I mean, wow!- and his thoughts and feelings are so real that the writing is brilliant. :)

It's the tiny little details that you choose to include that make it a really wonderful one shot, and I feel that by the end I can understand Sirius. My favorite line by far was:
"A call echoed behind him, but the voice wasn't hers, so he didn't look back."

That encompasses so much emotion and tells the reader such a history of thought simply through a few words- congratulations. :) You should be proud ^ 293232 for such an epic line. *hug tackles*

Yay! So a totally useless review I suppose, but it was amazing and I wanted you to know. :)

Cheers-

Author's Response: Oi! Laura! I haven't talked to you on chat since this got posted, so I couldn't tell you! :P But I'm glad to know you stalk my author page, rofl :P

I'm glad you enjoyed it! I love this song and after some consultation changed the ship from James/Lily to Sirius, which I'm quite pleased with. I feel like the tiny details I include are important, and it seems to me that a lot of authors skip that, believing that we just know what they're seeing.

And I guess emotional detail is my thing :P

Definitely not a useless review! You made my day!! I'm so so so glad you enjoyed this! :D Thanks so much!

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