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Review:Laugharama_llama says:
Becca, again this was beautiful.

I can't think of much else to say! The way you conveyed Oliver's emotions and thoughts was so touching! And the way you described the scene and everyone else's reaction to Cedric's death as so moving. Honestly, when you wrote the part about Cedric's father crying, it reminded me of so much and I had to leave the page for a few because I started crying also.

The whole scene was so beautiful beyond words. The mantra was so fitting with the story and how Oliver was feeling - ah!

I think my favorite part was when Cho came out and talked told Oliver that Cedric loved him. It was just a really wonderful way of comforting Oliver without comforting him, and was a great way to end the story. I love this whole idea of him standing outside the door, unsure of if he even belongs. It was a nice representation of their whole relationship - unsure, kind of on the edge, and in the end not even really occuring.

I know I keep saying beautiful, but that's the only word that comes to mind :) So, beautiful.

Author's Response: Hey Katrina!

I am so sorry that it took me this long to answer this. Inexcusable. life's been way too busy. :)

It's wonderful to hear that the mantra worked out well... and the description... and the cho scene. There was so much in this fic that made me nervous. I'm glad that it worked out.

-xx-
Melissa

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