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Review:Rachel says:
Hey, this is Rachel from the forums, here with your review!
So, I don't know if you've read my latest post, but I promised to read through everyone's novels, but I could only review the last chapter, seeing as I have a ton of requests coming in.

So I just sat down to read one of your chapters. And then I couldn't stop! They were so, so, so great! Every single one. I'm really angry that I still don't know whether or not Victoire said yes, but with their history together, I can't imagine her having said no. I assume that's going to be the last chapter.

Overall, I'd say you have a great writing style and good technique. One thing that is absolutely brilliant is your characterization. Every single person in this story really has their own character. Even Ron, who you mentioned only once or twice, still has his little quirks and the bits and bobs that make him Ron are still there.

The story is moving along quite nicely. Although I was upset at first that we didn't get to see Victoire's answer right away, I've now realized that this isn't your regular story and that we went back in time for the long haul, so it's not going too slowly but it's also not moving too quickly. I saw no problem with you skipping four years, only because those four years might not have been significant to your cause.

I usually don't like Teddy-centered fics. I'm not sure why. There's just something about a lot of them. But I absolutely love this one. I love the relationship between Harry and Teddy. Also, Teddy and Victoire are absolutely adorable. And I love how you characterized all the Weasley children differently, because that's sometimes hard to do, as there's so many of them.

Anyway, that's about all. Wonderful job and I'm sorry it took so long to review!
10/10!

Author's Response: Awww. :) This is a fabulous review that was well worth the wait... Thank you!

So right you are, the story is based around Teddy's life as he grows up and his corresponding relationship with Victoire. I'm tickled pink that you complimented my characters. I work really hard on them. They are so firmly individual in my mind.

I'm happy that you enjoyed this fic, despite it being Teddy centered. :) I'll be posting the next chapter some time this week.
Thank You so Much!
Melissa


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