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Review:Laugharama_llama says:
Part two!

Hey melissa! I didn't mind the chapter shift, although now that I think about it, I might have preferred this as chapter one. But it's fine the way it is!

As I said in the cbox, Baby Teddy is adorable. The part where you wrote that Teddy kissed Fleur's belly made me "aww!" aloud! I loved your characterization of Teddy! I really enjoyed the difference between this chapter and chapter one, because I was able to see how Teddy matured, but also the parts of his character that he still retained.

Onward!

Author's Response: Hey again Katrina!

The way the story is written is that Teddy is awaiting Victoire's response in the present (prologue) and flashing back over important moments of their lives together (chapters) until she decides to answer him (epilogue). I always worry that readers will find this awkward...

I'm glad that you find Teddy cute. :) Well, since we all know that TEDDY RULES THE WORLD. :) I am really enjoying watching his character grow as I write it and am glad that you noticed the growth.

Thank you so much!!


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