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Review:Laugharama_llama says:
Hi Melissa! Look, I'm finally reviewing you story! (sarcasm) But seriously, I'm sorry this took so long.

I really liked this! I thought it was so sweet. The description you went into with this story was phenomenal! I really enjoyed how you described his thoughts on the Weasley Family Christmas Gatherings - I could practically see everything in my head!

Another thing I liked was how you developed the story and the way you used this Christmas carol in a very non-religious way, even though it's a Christmas song. I know some people might have been offended if you made this all about God and Jesus, but you were able to twist it in a way, so that this story was just about the general feeling of Christmas - about love and giving! I really enjoyed the moral of the story, because a lot of times people get caught up in their own problems and forget that a lot of people have it worse off.

I think the only negative (ish!) thing I have to mention about this story was the grammar. I found that you had a few misplaced commas and I noticed a time in the beginning when you had the word "threw" instead of "through." But really, those things can be fixed with a beta :)

Like I said, you did a wonderful job with this fic! It was a very sweet, enjoyable story, very fitting with the holiday season! I wish I read this earlier!

Katrina

Author's Response: Hey Katrina! Yay! It is quite alright. real life happens.

I'm happy that you enjoyed this story. :) I tried really hard to paint out the scene with my description, so your compliment means the world to me.

I didn't want to bombard readers with an overtly religious theme, so I tried to do the story as secularly as possible. I'm glad that the moral still came through despite this.

ah. Grammar. I had a friend read over it quickly because my beta wasn't able to read it. I really should clean it up. *Guilty Face*

Thanks sooo much Katrina!
Melissa


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