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Review:collette michelle says:
Hello, love!

Sorry it has taken me a bit to get around to your review, holidays are quite busy and finding time to read all in one sitting seemed sparse. But I am here now. Oh, yes, this is Collette from TGS, if you didn't know already!

I enjoyed reading this, I was curious how it would be, following the Carol, that is. And i enjoy it! As to your concerns as to it being 'cheesy', I don't think I would say it was so much, if you know the carol, you know how it goes. But Christmas time is the best for a bit of 'make-you-smile-warm-your-heart' stories!

I liked Hugo, the poor boy never gets written! He is so often forgotten. I think you did him a believable job. He was very endearing and sweet. A Good mix of what I could assume from who his mum and dad are.

I think your descriptions were great, they were very strong. I was able to clearly see the setting in which Hugo was. Great Job with that!

Nice job, I enjoyed reading this! I hope you had a Happy Christmas and have a lovely New Year!

xx.
Collette

Author's Response: oops. I thought that I had responded to this already. Better late than never I suppose.

I'm glad that you found this one shot to be enjoyable. I completely agree with you. Hugo never gets enough love. It makes me very happy to know that you picked up on his character so well. I intended that he come across as a sweet and endearing boy that was the perfect mixture of Ron and Hermione. :)

Yay! I feel that descriptions are my strongest facet of writing. Sometimes I fear that I use too many descriptions. I'm very relieved to hear that it was successful.

Thank you so much Collette!
Melissa


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