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Review:theRandomSlytherin says:
Hello there! Michelle here with your review!

Hmm...
Well, first of all, I think this experiment had fantastic results; raw intensity of battle, and the confusion accompanying love made this story frighteningly realistic and enjoyable.

Characterization was awesome! I really mean it; I felt like Luna was written just as she was in HP (and possibly better) and Dean's thoughts and reflections were very insightful.

The story flow and transitions were subtle and added to the story in a positive way; I thought it was great!

The present tense and First Person POV was excellent, because I feel that First Person is very difficult when you have to capture the exact emotions and thoughts of a character, and you pulled it off brilliantly!

The unique pairing of Luna/Dean appealed to me, and I'm glad you requested it, because now I'm going to put it in my favorites :)

Peace, love, and chocolates,
Michelle

Author's Response: Michelle, Thank you!

It's wonderful to know that you found this to be a successful experiment. The juxtaposition between the romance and the action was jarring and so made me slightly nervous to put out there.

*Doing a little happy dance* Characterization is one of the most important things to me, and to I am always exstatic when readers appreciate it as well. :)

I'm glad you didn't have trouble with the first person pov. For some reason, it never seems to read as smoothly as the past tense.

I'm a self-proffessed canon-freak. That being said, Luna/Dean is the only non canon pairing that I can really enjoy. I'm glad that they appeal to others too.

Peace love and Chocolates?!?! What could be better. This was a wonderful review. Thank you.
-Melissa

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