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Review:Georgia Weasley says:
Oh, my boys! Poor George. You captured his frustration and grief that bordered on madness. There was one time I thought you had a type-o in there, when you said the moon lit the earth when the 'son' had gone away, but it really makes sense both ways. The 'son' has gone, and George is left without his other half. Nothing is easy anymore. Nothing makes sense, and George has gone down these lanes of memory searching for purpose. Such beautiful imagery! Such terrible, beautiful sadness. Again, I am speechless. Stream of consciousness is difficult to write coherently. You put me to shame. 10 of 10. Incredible.

Author's Response: Thank you so much for reviewing this! I am really glad you found it so moving -- especially since, as this was my first experience writing SOC, I really had no clue what I was doing. ^_^

Yep, I did write "son" intentionally, and I wasn't entirely sure about whether I liked it that way -- though I wasn't supposed to edit anyway, so it was a moot point, haha! I think I do like it that way, but there's something to be said for subtlety, and I don't know whether changing "sun" to "son" was very subtle of me. :-P

I'm seriously flattered by your review. All I wanted to write in response was "squee," haha. Thank you so much!

Melanie


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