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Review:TwilightPrincess says:
Ooh, Melanie, this was great! I never gave much thought to the girl sitting behind Sirius in that memory - leave it up to Kalina to make a challenge about such a minute detail =P But really, it's a great idea and I love the way you wrote it. I find pining for someone is one of the most pure forms of love, in that little time frame right before it turns to stalker. I love it.

I really like the repetition in the end! It was a brilliant effect. Also, the last line is my favorite. It's so heartbreaking =(

Great job! Thanks for taking my challenge! I hope you enjoyed yourself. ^_^

.:.Ilia.:.

Author's Response: Thanks, Ilia! I really liked your challenge because it teaches you not to get bogged down in stuff that doesn't matter, and I had fun combining it with Kalina's challenge because it was extra challenging to create an entire story and identity for this random girl in 500 words.

Haha, your comment about the time frame before pining turns to stalker made me laugh...it's so true. It was important to me that this girl not be obsessive...just very broken-hearted, poor thing.

Thank again for the review, and the challenge!


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