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Review:collette michelle says:
Oh, you can't help but feel so horrible for this poor girl!

I adored this, Melanie, really! I have really enjoyed reading all the entries for the 500 words challenge, it has been so neat to see what people can do with such a limitation. I never thought I'd be able to just write 500 words for it!

I think this was perfect to the word limitation. You were still able to convey such a strong mention of the girl sitting behind Sirius. It seemed so familiar, like she would have been a character from the books talked more about. You really brought someone that I had completely forgotten about, to life! It really does make me wonder more about her after reading this, she is quite a mystery!

I loved this line: Most people want nothing to do with him, and he wants nothing to do with most people. I think in a sense I have always thought of Sirius that way. In the sense that he doesn't so much as want anything to do with more people. I've always thought of him as content with his friends.

Well, after typing a lot, I just wanted to say how much I truly enjoyed reading this. It was lovely in so many ways. Excellent job, love!

10/10
xx.
Collette

Author's Response: Thanks, Collette!

The 500 word limitation really is a huge challenge -- it really forces you to think about exactly what you want to say. It was an extra challenge to write about this girl because we have absolutely no information about her, and I had to give her a story and an identity in 500 words. I'm really glad I was able to accomplish it and make you feel for her! ^_^

I see Sirius like that, too -- just a boy who wants to hang out with his friends and not be bothered with much else, sort of a loner even though he's considered cool.

This review made me really happy! Thank you so much!

Melanie


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