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Review:Indigo Seas says:
Here as requested! ^_^ Sorry I'm a bit late...

Well, this was just... lovely. There are very few Hannah/Neville one-shots out there, so I was very excited when you posted with this! Hannah and Neville just have this natural connection, I think, and in this one-shot, you pulled that connection off wonderfully.

I really loved all of your descriptions! The light on the water, the tears running down Neville's cheeks, even Hannah's hand on her husband's back were little tid-bits that made the story seem more real and allowed the reader to be more immersed in the story. Great job.

And the plot! I've never really thought about Neville's parents dying. I mean, it doesn't come up very often at all in fanfiction. You've brought it to light here, and I loved the way you captured the moment. Getting into Neville's head after his parents' death (because of their complex situation) must have been a tad tricky, but I think you did a lovely job.

All in all, I have nothing to complain about. I really enjoyed the read. Thanks for requesting!

- Rin

Author's Response: Awww. Why thank you for this lovely review! I love Neville and Hannah. They are so unexplored and open to possibilities. :)

-witness


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