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Review:hannah17 says:
O: They took her prefect badge!

Totally didn't see that coming, but I liked it XD That was a good way of showing the whole famous family issue, which invariably has to be brought up in every next generation story.

And I loved that convo between her and Cal. He has abs XD Knew it! But moving beyond my usual distracted responses - I did think you did a really good job of humanizing Lily in this ^_^ Sure she's a bit of a betch, but the fact that she'd leave detention - not giving a shite about her prefect badge - in order to be by Calico and then go and apologize to him later say a lot as far as her friendship with him goes. You can tell it's pretty deep ^_^ The admitting jealously part was pretty cute too.

Anyway update! I need to keep reading XD

*hugs* Hannah

Author's Response: I know! Aren't they mean?

You didn't? Oh thats good. Element of surprise and all that. You're SO right about family. It really is the crucial element for good Next-Gen.

That why quite a hard convo to write. It had to be...normal with a sort of undertone to it.
I did humanise her? Yay! Yesh exactly! That's just completely what I was trying to get across, so I wont go into it any more than that.

Gahh! You just want updates for everything! I'll do my best!

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