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Review:hunkydory15 says:
loving the story, but I don't understand why Madeline is so hesitant to befriend Elliot. Because he'll make her talk about her father? I guess that makes sense.

Author's Response: I'll try and help =)

Madeline's a pretty private person. She thinks herself round in circles rather than talk to someone about it, unless it's Alice, who gets the most honest answers about everything from her. Elliot caught her when she was in a bit of a hole. She didn't have Alice, but she couldn't keep it entirely to herself.

So she opened up to a stranger, under the happy impression she could let herself go, and not have to worry about them after she'd left.

If Elliot hadn't been a friendly Muggle in a coffee shop, she'd never have gone back to talk to him.

So she ends up feeling somewhat betrayed when he turns up in her life. He knows things he never would have if he'd been honest with her from the start. I suppose she's more annoyed at herself than anything.

Does that help?

Thank you so much for your lovely reviews! =)
-Rose.

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