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Review:a potter po says:
Hi! Your story is lovely. I'm glad you wrote it.
Just a few things I spot, please feel free to change it or not;

Your title of the chapter -- is it meant t obe Hogsmeade?

A few grammatical errors:
"When you love someone, and I mean, truly love (insert comma) is it better to keep it hidden"

"When all you care (insert about) is this person, their every action and thought (insert comma) yet it seems you can never find a way of communicating this, is it really love at all?"

"I shirt the fabric and look up at the sky" -- is "shirt" a verb and what does it mean?

Your story is really lovely. It's non-pretentious and yet your words hold a lot of meaning and tension in it. I like it!

Author's Response: Hi there! Thanks very much for pointing these out, it's really helpful :)

Thank you very much, it means a lot! Thanks for taking the time to review. I really appreciate it.

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