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Review:uptowngirlinlove says:
Hello, this is lucretia neva/uptowngirlinlove from the review section.

1. Plot: I haven't read the Mysteries Unveiled because the lack of time for myself just takes its toll on me so I didn't exactly understand how Harry died, not that it makes any difference. The plot is good, a nice fresh breath of air from the fics that mainly center on Hermione losing someone(be that Draco or Ron). It was interesting to see Ginny in that position, as she always seem to be the strong one...

2. Characters: I liked Ginny in here, you definitely managed to convey the sensitivity in her. In most of the fics that I've read she's this fiery red-head with a temper, which is quite alright, but as I said before a change of perspectives is always welcomed. I also enjoyed the bit at the end, with Ginny making amends with his death, admitting that it would be hard but that she'll try hard until finally making it through. That would be something that Ginny would think.

Overall: It's a good one shot, albeit being short. but you've managed to compact the information and rend a plausible side of Ginny's story. Overall, it was an enjoyable one-shot.

Author's Response: Thanks so much for your wonderfully encouraging and detailed review.

How Harry dies, well, I haven't posted the end of Mysteries Unveiled yet so you wouldn't have found out anyway. I also said that this story may well not be connected to the other one. Now, what I had in my mind was that Harry was a Horcrux (I was convinced of this since HBP) but that both Voldy and himself had to die for Voldy not to be able to return, so yes, he would have died in the final battle, which in my mind happens a bit later than in canon and Ginny would had just had the child, so this is the first Valentine's Day after the event.

I normally write Ginny as you said, fiery and with a temper but I think it's safe to asume that she's not like that all the time. I see her also as someone very loving and sensitive. The baby is a bit of a consolation for her, of course, even if she is very young still but I imagine her missing Harry so much! even if she presents a brave face to the world.

I'm so pleased that you found her characterisation plausible.

Thanks so much!

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