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Review:chaotic says:
Well, I must say, I was a bit skeptical about reading this. I despise Ginny with a burning, fiery passion, and to read a story with her in it, it gives me the shivers. Despite the fact that I wish Ginny a thousand deaths by sporks, I actually enjoyed this story. It was quite deep; you delved far into Ginny's mind, portraying her feelings about Harry's death quite marvelously. The part where Ginny seems to accept Harry's death was bloody brilliant- I felt that if I was in her place, I'd react in the same way. Your emotions came across very well, you could definitely imagine her sorrow in her head. It was touching- lovely, the way she reflected. And her mum, and Hermione helping her along- it was quite realistic.

Just to point out a few grammatical errors, you wrote "But time goes on, she casually said, what the town has lost in commerce, has gained in tranquillity." Tranquility was spelled incorrectly, and you forgot to end your quotation marks before and after 'she casually said.'
Also, 'It was as if Harry was reaching out to her, telling her not to feel sad for him, that he was in peace, that she must try to be happy and, evenutally, find love again.' Eventually is spelled wrong, as well. Those are the only two mistakes I found, though, so that's pretty brilliant.

It was quite amazing, actually. Incredibly sad as well. You expressed concern about it being to mushy, in reply, NO, I think it was the perfect amount of mushyness. Just enough to show that Ginny really did love him.
Wonderful.
10/10.
Chaotic.

Author's Response: Wow, thanks so much, especially since you really don't like Ginny. I wouldn't have requested a review if I had realised that you do despise her (maybe I didn't read your rules properly).

Anyway, thanks so much! I feel extremely encouraged by your review. I'm glad that you thought her emotions come across well and realistically.

I will go and correct the typos, thanks so much for pointing them out.

Wonderful and in-depth review. It has made me very happy!

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