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Review:starry_night89 says:
Oh, he saved her from someone? Interesting. I'm going to be honest though, there was something..lacking in this piece. The plot seemed ok but the characters don't sound like themselves. I mean since when did Hermione forget to do an essay? The characters aren't necessarily OOC but stilll..not themselves. I hope that made sense though I'm still trying to figure out how to make things clear. For instance, the whole breakfast scenario is slightly OOC. Draco isn't the type of guy who'd mock hermione and she wouldn't be laughing even if he did. At that moment, they seemed like friends, I know after that part they wonder why they are talking to each other but, it doesn't seem believable, you know? Maybe it's just me. I've read SO many Dramione fics that I can't help but be so analytical. Hope this helped! :)

Author's Response: Thanks for leaving me a review. I understand with what your saying, I'll try to steer clear from the 'buddy-buddy' thing you see.

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