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Review:subtle_plan says:
Hey there! :) I'm in with your review :D

First of all: I'm a sucker for descriptions, adjectives and metaphors, so everything embodying this is thumbs up from me. And since yours is in abundance, there are two big thumbs up for you :D

My favorite line: "Leaving her alone in a dark room to watch herself waste away as slowly and painfully as the paint peeling from the bare walls that surrounded her." Amazing, touching and very real. Great job!

The only thing I really can think about is that the road from Narcissa's Manor to Rodolphus' home is dragging on a bit, so you might want to trim that part down a few paragraphs.

And I do not know if I approve of the nickname "Dolphus" :P Haha!

Yeah, personally I'm not really into Narcissa and the rest of the senior death eaters, so if I had seen this story randomly at HPFF I wouldn't have clicked on it.

But this wasn't bad at all!!! Your flow of words is really good, and I like your writing style. I like the way you describe the emotions.

Keep up the good work!!

Author's Response: Thanks for the review!

I love that you are one for the whole descriptive metaphors and all - it puts us in the same boat.

As you said, that kind of is my style, and I am quite proud of it.

I love that you commented on the paint line. That is one that I had somewhat forgotten, but really kind of sums up a lot of things. Thinking about it, it is also one that I considered taking out altogether out of fear that it would be too much over the top, but I am glad that you like it.

And yes, I am a sucker for messed up nicknames... Don't worry, I'm getting better!

I am also very glad that I got you to read something that you wouldn't normally have considered, and especially glad that you did like it.

Thanks again!

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