Report a Review

This service is designed to allow HPFF users to alert the staff about inappropriate reviews.

Review:HrXd says:
Okay well I think that you wrote the characters way out of Canon I mean Narcissa loves Lucius not her sisters husband. I just think that you were out of this world when you wrote this. I mean you made Bella nice if you reread the 6th book you will see that she is a devil filled with hate and loyalty to the dark lord. This fic needs work.

Author's Response: Thank you for taking time to review, and to a certain point I can say that I can actually agree with you. But I don't think it was quite as bad as you say...

What you have to keep in mind is that this all happened years and years ago (back in the first battle). We already know very little about Narcissa, but I believe that it is very possible for her to be as I presented her in this fic, and to have changed over the years.

It very rarely says in the books that Narcissa and Lucius have always (or ever) had a passionate and loving relationship. They are close in DH, brought together by fear for their dear son, but we have no idea how their relationship started out. I do not believe that Lucius is at all a pleasant man to have as a husband, and could be close to unbearable at times. For a young girl (she was only just out of school when she married him) it would be extremely difficult to get through life with him as a husband, especcially when there is somebody else who once loved her so dearly.

True, Narcissa/Rodolphus never happened in the books, and I am not saying that it did. I hve always loved small, improbable (and yet possible) parings, and I tyhink that this one fitted wrather well. I am not trying to go by the history that was presented to us in the books, but more fill in the lengthy gaps.

And I am not sure what you are saying about Bella. I don't believe that I made her "nice." She is Narcissa's sister, and so she sees something in her that nobody else can ever see, but throughout the story Narcissa is angry and jealous towards her sister, and full of resentful thoughts. Bella stole Rodolphus from Narcissa, and then drove him to become a Death Eater... I don't find many things that she did to be "nice" at all (although she is one of my favorite characters).

Your Name:
Reason for this Report:

Examples:
  • The review is offensive.
  • The review is spam or chit-chat (not actually a review).
  • The review was double posted.
  • The review has formatting problems.
Submit Report:  





All stories remain the property of their authors and must not be copied in any form without their consent. This is an unofficial, not for profit site, and is in no way connected with J.K. Rowling, Scholastic Books or Bloomsbury Publishing or Warner Bros. It is not endorsed by any of the aforementioned parties. Rights to characters and their images is neither claimed nor implied. The use of photographs and/or the likeness of any person contained herein does not imply endorsement of any kind. Any depictions were obtained through publically available sources and therefore fall under fair use. Although we may provide links to other websites, we are not responsible for any material at these sites. You acknowledge that you link to these other websites at your own risk. All original administrative content is copyright of the site owner and must not be copied in any form (electronic or otherwise) without the prior consent of the siteowner. ©2000-2012 Fanfictionworld.net

[terms of service] [report abuse] [privacy policy] [site credits]
 
 

navigation

home

search HPFF
read stories
write stories
login/register
get help
site links
forums
podcasts
Terms of Service
Site Rules
contact us

  
 
 

categories & genres

Genre:
- crossover
- drama
- fluff
- general
- horror/dark
- humor
- mystery
- romance
- action/adventure
- angst
- au
- young adult

Popular Pairings:
- harry/ginny
- ron/hermione
- james/lily
- draco/hermione
- more...

Format:
- one-shot
- short story
- novella
- novel
- short story collection
- songfic

  
 
 

quick links

my account
ToS
random story
site rules
help
merchandise


  
 
 

fanfictionworld.net